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This would look good in a home theater system that can stream NG quickly.

Here's feedback - you've sorta mixed different art styles. The road drawing style doesn't match the trees and fire. Mixing styles could work, but here, it just feels like you scrapbooked stuff. The car scene isn't as complete as the building one (maybe a more detailed road?).

Another hint : houses that are further away from the camera should be drawn with a thinner line, otherwise you'll get roofs that are almost completely gray.

It would help if the edges of the houses were parallel with the roads (unless you're trying to be abstract). You can get away with breaking the rules of perspective, but it should be deliberate.

Your use of music and editing works well. You understand the essence of a trailer. The buildings' art style is kinda interesting. Look over some abstract art, and see what you'd like to embody.
I say, if you like drawing and animating, keep it up.

abe3002 responds:

Thank you very much this has helped me a lot :)

I don't know if these are your own drawn graphics, but it's a solid clip. The sounds at the end were unpleasant though.

frass70 responds:

yup they are

I was entertained. The arm proportions on the guy bothered me a little, but everything else was good.

Keep up the effort.

Agadroid responds:

Edit: i am not working on the project for now

'Should have done this JibJab style, or... I dunno. Flash has a way of surpressing drawing techniques.

GalacticCow responds:

I think it's because I can't draw well in general, let alone when I'm almost trying to draw poorly.

The small-pixel sprites hurt this one.
I applaud the effort, though. 11 minutes is a lot.

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