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[MafiaCat]

This is like... it's like the rough draft of some video that should be a lot funnier. The cat looks good, but what this needs is a fancy background with some cool mafia music, with cigars, liquor and women spread out around the table like icing on a cake.

tredaycartoons responds:

thanks i aprecaite the advice and this was just a test i was doing their will be more next mafia cat episode or clip i do once again thanks

[The Nerd-Brickfilm(HD)]

Not a bad stop-motion in terms of camera stability and smooth movement.
Lego animations are great, especially the ones WHERE THE GUY DOESN'T JUST STAND AROUND !

MushroomHumor responds:

i understand this was just a quick test the only thing is im going to leave out the non-required bad words because its one of the worst parts about this animation...

[Game trailer]

Here's feedback - you've sorta mixed different art styles. The road drawing style doesn't match the trees and fire. Mixing styles could work, but here, it just feels like you scrapbooked stuff. The car scene isn't as complete as the building one (maybe a more detailed road?).

Another hint : houses that are further away from the camera should be drawn with a thinner line, otherwise you'll get roofs that are almost completely gray.

It would help if the edges of the houses were parallel with the roads (unless you're trying to be abstract). You can get away with breaking the rules of perspective, but it should be deliberate.

Your use of music and editing works well. You understand the essence of a trailer. The buildings' art style is kinda interesting. Look over some abstract art, and see what you'd like to embody.
I say, if you like drawing and animating, keep it up.

abe3002 responds:

Thank you very much this has helped me a lot :)

[Discont Sasuke vs tobi]

I don't know if these are your own drawn graphics, but it's a solid clip. The sounds at the end were unpleasant though.

frass70 responds:

yup they are

[Link's Journey (part 1/2)]

Keep up the effort.

Agadroid responds:

Edit: i am not working on the project for now

[Pokemon PokeRap]

'Should have done this JibJab style, or... I dunno. Flash has a way of surpressing drawing techniques.

GalacticCow responds:

I think it's because I can't draw well in general, let alone when I'm almost trying to draw poorly.

[Adventures of Sleepy]

Take an animation (that has even the slightest hint of professionalism) and imitate just one element of it.

SunOh responds:

I do that now.

[claymation test]

'Kind of a nice-to-look-at animation. It could benefit from having a punchline, even without words.

rippercool responds:

lol thanks

[Chocolate Chips]

Kinda looks like something you'd see on Sesame Street. They could never do this animation, because the chips would always be in cookies, and the cookies would always be in Cookie Monster.

Level19Productions responds:

) yeah